Do any of you read Norwegian?
 

Do any of you read/speak Norwegian?

I have a song I wrote in Norwegian. And I don't want to transcribe it to English.
I just want some one's opinion on what I wrote. I already did the Drums, Bass, Guitar/Keyboards for the song. I just want to try and fix some things.
If no one can read or speak Norwegian here than that's fine.

Fuck it, you guys don't have to reply. I will copy and paste it anyway.


Amor-Crimson Nacht

Song: Koverbilledkunstverk

En aapning i skogen hvor solen skinner. Hindret av trerne fanges vi i denne guds aapning.
Fanget av begravelsen pinse vi av guds godhet ingen flammer intet hat de hadde rett vi kom til helvete.

Det brenner det svir nar slikker vaart kjott opp mot skyene en roeyk en sky av vaares form....

vi kom til helvete
vi kom til helvete
vi kom til helvete

This was pretty great...
Men ingen punktumer eller kommaer?
Synes det manglet noen...

Are you Norwegian?(I can't be the only one...)

Your not.
There's a few people that are Norwegian here.

heey...
 

i have some norvegian friends here as an exchange student i can help u guys if u ask for somethin.........

Real good Orc, I'm fucking impressed! You are German? Well, as I said, real good, you only missed some .and ,.

Typos typos.....

That´s nice. A little short though.

The song is 2:40 or something anyway...

I wanna learn to speak norwegian =(
 

so i would be able to understand what most of gorgoroth is saying :bawling:

Translation of the Norwegian song...(Attention!)
 

Amor-Crimson Nacht

Song: Koverbilledkunstverk

En aapning i skogen hvor solen skinner. Hindret av trerne fanges vi i denne guds aapning.
Fanget av begravelsen pinse vi av guds godhet ingen flammer intet hat de hadde rett vi kom til helvete.


an opening in
the forest, were the sun shines. hold back by the treas we are trapped in this opening of god.
trapped by the (????) funeral we of gods goodness. no flames, no hate, they were right we came to hell.

Det brenner det svir nar slikker vaart kjott opp mot skyene en roeyk en sky av vaares form....


it burnes it burnes, when lickes our meat up against the sky a smoke a cloud in the shape of spring.


vi kom til helvete
vi kom til helvete
vi kom til helvete



we came to hell
we came to hell
we came to hell>

Gracias to Synne Sofie.......

If you didn´t already have a name, you could call it "Far åt Helevete";)