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bloodjunky665 2004-06-22 02:00

Kill The Kids At School
 
Lying, dying from within
Life can be so cruel
The only thing I wanna do
Is kill the kids at school
Take a knife and stick it in
Needles in the eyes
Brand them with an iron rod
Listen to their cries

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is begging me for more...

Bloody treats, tasting sweet
Licking up the juice
Tongue is trailing to the corpse
Flesh is coming loose
Face falls further deep within
Ripping out the meat
Deep inside the ribcage now
Clawing at the feet

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is begging me for more

Blood spilling, killing kids
Never wanna stop
Feisty bitches good to eat
Entrails on the top
Don't know why they hated me
They thought that they were cool
Now it doesn't matter
Coz I killed the kids at school

Nothing can be done now
Their brains are on the floor
The little voice inside my head
Is satisfied once more

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Its sortof funny, i spose. Well it is to me anyway. There are so many people at my school who I want to do this to... I wrote this about half a year ago whilst wagging in an abandoned building after putting up with a shitload of crap from a bunch of kids at school. I was trying not to do anything or else I would have grabbed something and stabbed them with it.

BLS 2004-06-22 06:03

Go cut yourself while listening to marilyn manson. Loser

Agent-Orange 2004-06-22 06:43

I see a lawsuit coming up for you.

dying-oath 2004-06-22 09:45

you're gonna get screwed by some lawyer
but i like the piece

L,B'XXX 2004-06-22 10:04

Due to the tortuous nature I'm not surprized that d_o liked it. :) I thought it was rather tasty ,too. Not quite serious mind you ,but sort of says what it needs to. Hey, when they're pointing fingers at you they point more at themselves. Don't let it get to ya. After graduation none of them matter anyways.
It had a good flow to it and was pretty smooth. The entrails line was the only one I thought could be a little better worded so that's minor.
Hey, just don't go snakeshit for real.

Transient 2004-06-22 10:35

hahahahahaha if someone find this youll seriously go to jail

dying-oath 2004-06-22 13:16

no, i doubt that. Transient, if that was true, i would be in jail so much. i mean, just go look at "The Torture Chamber" that would get me busted.
Gram, i know, what's becoming of the new generation? we're all so focused on killing
; )

ShredIsNotDead 2004-06-22 14:45

fuck man good poem, sometimes i feel like that...i would just never ever do it. Hopefully you wouldnt either. Good poem tho

And shut up about lawyers and shit

Corpsevomit98 2004-06-22 15:50

Quote:
Originally Posted by Transient
hahahahahaha if someone find this youll seriously go to jail

If he lives in America yes the big bad stupid pieces of shit FBI will be on you i think.

Trendkill_420 2004-06-22 16:33

better venting it through writing, than acting upon it.

I used to feel similiar to you when i was in school. Not to such an extreme, but i deeply despised most people in my school. And to boot, it was during the columbine fiasco. A girl actually came up to me once and said "if you start to kill people, can you spare me". I was fucking flabergasted, so of course i said, "you're first you ignorant bitch".....
what a world.

ShredIsNotDead 2004-06-22 16:42

Quote:
Originally Posted by Trendkill_420
better venting it through writing, than acting upon it.

I used to feel similiar to you when i was in school. Not to such an extreme, but i deeply despised most people in my school. And to boot, it was during the columbine fiasco. A girl actually came up to me once and said "if you start to kill people, can you spare me". I was fucking flabergasted, so of course i said, "you're first you ignorant bitch".....
what a world.


haha you must be a real loser :p

FearFrost 2004-06-22 17:07

Nah, hes from PEI, you would go crazy just being on the island for more then 20 mins... I did.

dying-oath 2004-06-22 20:56

PEI? what, some secret gang association where you live on an island or something?
where's this fabled island? i think i would go crazy, if not surrounded by...............oh shit, wrong forum for that stuff

FearFrost 2004-06-22 21:18

Prince Edward Island = PEI (and yes its a provence)

Its a small island off the coast of New Brunswick/Nova Scotia... Its part of canada.

Transient 2004-06-23 14:18

yes, fbi and cops and all that

at the least youd need to see a therapist

Corpsevomit98 2004-06-23 15:32

No, due to the columbine shit they take it way too seriously, I suppose they should, but they are still gay.

Trendkill_420 2004-06-23 16:08

Quote:
Originally Posted by ShredIsNotDead
haha you must be a real loser :p


If having long hair and listening to heavy metal, made me a loser, i guess i was.

Dick wad :p

Transient 2004-06-23 19:16

absolutely, those asshats at columbine changed EVERYTHING

L,B'XXX 2004-06-23 19:26

Hey ! That means I'm a loser too! :D:D:D We can all be losers together! Only thing is I can't sit on my long, blonde hair almost anymore. I got this new little Scorpion vaccuum cleaner and had my braid hanging down and it kinda got sucked against the motor housing and YANK ! I think I got a trim ? (Hmm, did I say I was blonde?) :D

Isn't that what started the whole Columbine thig anyway? Kids calling other kids losers basically? I've been called an airhead, a blonde, a freak, a hippie, a geek,a french person and mom so tell me that isn't abuse? And I've survived.

It's ridiculous the kind of world in which we live, but each generation has said that, too. It used to be if kids said "I'm gonna kill you!" it meant you were gonna beat them up or seek some type of mild revenge on them , but now it's a verbal assault that has to be documented and all that crap. You just have to be descreet about who you say what to. I don't take poetry or lyrics about things like that real seriously. Maybe I should. The ones in which someone seems truely suicidal I have more caution with because the tone just seems a cry at times. No one should ever feel that way.

I do sometimes wonder if songs and stuff gets anyone's attention.

Heck, when Bob was in elementary school they made a list of kids in their class. The parents got called in for a special meeting before they even asked any of these kids what the list was for. It was for a baseball game they were planning. People had taken time from work and gotten babysitters and all for that. It was ridiculous.

Soulinsane 2004-06-24 10:49

KILL KILL KILL


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