Vocals feedback

[DarknessEnthroned]

i'm new here and i'd like to get some feedback on my vocals.
Candlemass vocal cover (http://rapidshare.com/files/95776388/Grantsblackmetalgrowling_candlemass_.wma)
i recorded it on a computer mic, the musics really quiet and the quality sucks, but it gives you a good idea of what i sound like.

[DarknessEnthroned]

what, no comments? i'm trying to go for a black metal rasp and i'd like to know if anyone knows any good techniques for improving it.

[CAPCOPSNOW]

wow that raelly sucks your using horrible technique nvm the fact dm or bm rasps are some of the easiest things to do... sry buddy watch some more videos