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[- EXILE -]

Hey just wondering what you guys think, Ive only been singing death metal for about 4 or 5 months now so still alot to learn. The song is Stripped, Raped and Strangled by Cannibal Corpse, I kinda had to keep it down cos other people in the house tho. The Link is: http://www.zshare.net/audio/death-metal-wav.html Any feedback would be great thanks.

[XxSiC-AnarchistxX]

you're along the right lines but at the moment it just sounds like you're doing the lyrics not feeling them, if you know what i mean? try and add some emotion to it