IS THIS ANY GOOD? :)

[emptylane]

hey everyone
i'm young and experimenting... and made some songs
relaly would appreciate hearing your views on it, how to improve etc..
click here to listen - empty lane (http://www.purevolume.com/emptylane)
thanx a lot

[younguitarist]

Spamming piece of shit! :mad:

[Corpsevomit98]

I dont think he was really spamming, but....yeah cuntrag assfuck.

[The Doctor]

haha, and best of all.....IT SOUNDS LIKE SHIT!

wannabe ryan parry