How's it sound?

[rapeandruin]

Hmmmm taking a cue from that one guy who recently posted a song he made I guess I'll post something also. What do you think...

[h4x5k8]

its pretty sweet, to many power chords in my opinion, also riff on measure 14 is pretty sweet but the transintion into the 16th riff from the 14th riff is kinda wierd same with measure 4 to 6, also try adding like second endings in there cause its kinda repetative, like make it reapeat 3 times and then on the 4th time make that certain riff have a differant ending that makes a good transition into the next riff. other than that id say its :drunk:

[younguitarist]

20 errors :eek: :eek:

[arvina]

what program do i use to listen, my computer is being a bitch...

[memnoch]

You need Powertab.

I think it pretty much sucks. Sounds like metal from the 80's, driven solely by overused powerchords and the infamous open "E" note. Build a time machine, go back to the early 80's and apply for a position with Metallica after Mustaine left, you might have a chance with this.

[h4x5k8]

You need Powertab.

I think it pretty much sucks. Sounds like metal from the 80's, driven solely by overused powerchords and the infamous open "E" note. Build a time machine, go back to the early 80's and apply for a position with Metallica after Mustaine left, you might have a chance with this.
pretty much what i was thinkin but i tried to say it a little nicer.

[Infinity]

This song Soooooo derived from Corpral Jigsore, am I right?

Anyway, it was alright needs, to be FASTER!!!! \m/ hehe.

[Infinity]

I want to post something I wrote - Should I amke another thread? I dont want to be clogging up the forum.

[BLS]

Since it seems to be a common trend to do this.. just make a thread entitled "Post your songs" or something..

[rapeandruin]

This song Soooooo derived from Corpral Jigsore, am I right?

Anyway, it was alright needs, to be FASTER!!!! \m/ hehe.

Aye...